Great introspection well-shared, Dawn. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

In dissolute repair, I sit.
I pray. I wait. I cry inside,
a self-contained system of decay.

Clap Clap Clap...excellent poetry...very very insightful my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Well, out of darkness comes this BRILLIANT LIGHT! You here turn a doom-and-gloom into piercing rays of intelligent inspiration to shatter the "prison cell", for a start. The concepts, the language, the hypertensility of the structure... this bounces, Dawn, even if the subject-matter is gloopy! Very, very clever without any self-awareness or pretension; part of its considerable strength is the tautness and clarity. A very visceral write that is far from viscous - it is a grand "poetic utterance", as my tutor might say - that seems so well-hinged that its whole "falling onto the page" seems one of effortless and inevitable ease. Very well done - as others have said, you are be the source of your own solution! Bless you and thank you, Kate xx

exceptionally wise and flawless poem ...

Nice write. I love the ending.

With your brilliance comes the opposite which allows the doubts to consume...if you let them...but you won't! Right?;-) Superb poem Dawn!

The answer lies within, Dawn. Sounds like an extended commune with Nature is in order! Powerfully expressed.
Best,
CArolyn

Glue sniffing won't help. Just make a sticky situation.

Dawn only knows the answer. With Gods help..

Science is not the panacea that was once believed..