Comes a time out of time in a dream right as rain on the day I soar, make my way to love’s full bloom beyond this gloom, from sorrow’s seed peace meets my need and circles back to close my lack... comes a time out of time in a dream right as rain.
Love the cyclical nature of this write, Dawn - but the first and repeated last two lines are just SO stunning in themselves that, despite the beautiful rhythm and flow to this, I falter and stumble owing to the delight of these amazingly astringent and striking words. I shall not soon forget them and will delight in tossing them around my busy brain for a while: Time out of time I think they will make me feel right as rain! Bless you - enjoyed! TY Kate xx
Beautifully said Dawn! Concise words that deliver
the power of the sentiment.
Eileen
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2005
Dear Dawn,
this is absolutely sublime!
it literally inspires awe!
Great work....and now i am wondering ...whether or not i read your
prior to this ,oh well.
no matter ; I'll b back!
peace and happy inspiration',
Rich Criso Suarez
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
BEFORE DARKNESS FALLS Retails for 14.95 / but you can have it now for only 11.95 This is a book of poetry and prose that deals with real life issues that all of mankind comes to face. Some of the poems deal with the tenderness of love, while others s
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and "a dream right as rain" Those are great
lines.
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
the power of the sentiment.
Eileen
this is absolutely sublime!
it literally inspires awe!
Great work....and now i am wondering ...whether or not i read your
prior to this ,oh well.
no matter ; I'll b back!
peace and happy inspiration',
Rich Criso Suarez
Carmen :-)