I fell easily out of my day and into your dream where you barely even noticed me as the drowning child as the hungry mother as the angel spilling tears.
I fell clumsily out of your dream into my day where I barely even noticed you as the drowning child as the hungry father as the angel spilling tears.
There in your dream, here in my day: let this be a sign that deep in the rivers of the heart flow streams of hope and our love waits to breathe again.
Here in my day, there in your dream: let this be a sign that wide are the waters of promise that say we can build a bridge that spans the distance between.
well done... a poetic challenge. enjoyed the placement on the page, plus the "repetition".
TX
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2005
Dawn,
Let me be the first to say; 'Your Talent's shining brilliantly here!Really Awesome truth you have presented here so well!
Creatively interesting poem indeed!
it's powerful and very thought provoking ! Great Poem!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
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Excellent!!!!!!!!!! Definately a keeper--you nailed it, as Tinka said. SPOT ON!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Thanks for sharing!!
You are missed!!
Love Tinka
I like your style, very innovative
thanks for sharing
Take care,
Sherry
TX
Let me be the first to say; 'Your Talent's shining brilliantly here!Really Awesome truth you have presented here so well!
Creatively interesting poem indeed!
it's powerful and very thought provoking ! Great Poem!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez