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Off the Hook?
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Of all the fish I’ve met at sea,
you are the one who most helped me
to be, see beauty reflected,
swim sure in the faith there would be
oceans of opportunity
beyond my murky water days.

Still reeling from your cruelty
and light-deprived, I’ve fished around,
found solace sweet in quiet sound
of truth echoed in solitude:
you are no more the fish I knew,
and one day you will know this, too.

Whatever fish tale you believed,
I never tried to reel you in.
I only wanted just to swim
in your school, in a clearer stream.
Off the hook, you did not care. You
delivered me to hungry sharks.

In darkness, they devoured hope
whole as you hid, watched from your cave,
made no effort at all to save
bite-sized morsel of shared story.
You turned, swam back to your safety
in the net, proclaimed yourself free.


 


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 Reviews of "Off the Hook?"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
A powerfully meaningful metaphorical write, Dawn. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
Wow! An intense, sensory journey through dark waters. Very, very well done.

-Debra (DM)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
EXCELLENT!!!!! Dawn, it is sooooo hard, I think, to sustain an overt metaphor with such strength and clarity as you have done here, without it becoming over-egged and strained in some way... but NOPE!! You have achieved this difficult task and kept the whole thing TOTALLY on-the-edge with flair and precision. This is tantalising and wholly real, without a hint of artefice. I applaud you! Very well done and a brilliant poem to boot! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
you choice of words and use of metaphor, reels one into this painful and moving poem ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Deep touching read!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Wow, Dawn,

You've penned a whopper! One of your best...keep fishing, there's bigger (AND BETTER) fish out there in the deep blue sea. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
What superb metaphor, and the ebb and flow
so suits the bittersweet memories as they
ripple on the water with the fish ...

Eileen

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
This is a very painful but unique
look at the pain that can be caused
by love. Unfortunate yet it seems
to be the rule. So keep fishing!

Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Off the Hook is a very painful poem my dear sister. I can't imagine you falling in the jaws of the shark and your fish is just watching. OH my dear
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed on September 15, 2005
How very painful this is, extremely well written, and oh so very poignant,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
This touches deeply as I know a fish like that! Fantastic write.


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