A keeper, Dawn! This write is so mature and I hope it will be published. Pure inspiration and conveys its deep message with powerful evocation. Penultimate stanza takes my breath away! And the pace and rhythm are so unforced. Very confident, very well achieved - very well done! GREAT one! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2005
AS I read this snakes are on TV.
Always believe.
Somethings are just worth the wait..
Your writing leaves me breathless with anticipation, and leaves my mind reeling with the power you pack into each words--this is absolutely my favorite; definately your best yet! Saving it--and thank you.
Dawn
You captured this with deep human concerns and sympathetic understanding to the plight of the Katrina victims. Splendid job, creativity and wisdom
My goodness Daw! The metaphor is stypendous with your word usage. What a superb poem this is!The whole poem is great but this below took my breath away!Kudo's...Eileen
"Faith
chokes on its own parched
tongue, now arched
toward a taste of relief."
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Always believe.
Somethings are just worth the wait..
Your writing leaves me breathless with anticipation, and leaves my mind reeling with the power you pack into each words--this is absolutely my favorite; definately your best yet! Saving it--and thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
peace,
carolyn
Love Tinka
You captured this with deep human concerns and sympathetic understanding to the plight of the Katrina victims. Splendid job, creativity and wisdom
"Faith
chokes on its own parched
tongue, now arched
toward a taste of relief."
excellent write ...