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No Comment
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You make no comment
because you worry you will be misread,
misinterpreted, misunderstood.
Afraid of fault lines and fragile feelings,
you tell yourself it is safer
to say nothing at all.

The silence is deafening.
A ringing in my ears makes clear
an echo of inner emptiness.
Yet, you are present in your absence,
and I hold you like sacred space
in the long letting go.

You left without goodbye;
still, you hover near, thinking me unaware
of your proximity and care.
You do not want me to know, afraid
that I might squawk too loudly
for more of you.

I make no comment.
I no longer worry you will never speak
but pray for you to trust
as, even now, I find faith in your heart.
In your unspoken vow of fidelity
I hear the mighty roar of love.
 
 


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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2005
ooh amazing! How I too have felt this way... this was great

Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Dawn,

Dang, I can relate to this...very much. Powerfully and emotively expressed...BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Oh so well written....I can relate soooo well with this one!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Your thoughts are beautifully stated in this write Dawn, great write!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Some people don't know how to say goodbye or they are afraid if they do, they will burn their bridge to us. Even though they suspect that we are not what they truly want, until they find out what it is that they really do want, they want to make sure that we are still waiting in the wings for them. Love doesn't always mean that we are right for each other or at least not in the context that we want it to. Sometimes we are better off just being companions than we are being lovers simply because it is impossible for us to ever stop loving them and to be severed from them would be a crushing blow. Excellent write, Dawn!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Great sense of love is sometimes known in the silence of words. I always adore your use of words. Write on!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 10, 2005
sometimes silence says it all ...

clear well defined poem that is quite emotionally revealing ..

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 10, 2005
Dawn, this is excellence that has become one with you and your writing. Excellent

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 10, 2005
Your writing is always exceptional! This is powerful and clearly states your position. Well done!

Love,
Eileen


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