you have expressed the heart and soul of transformation in its onward quest to attain the catharsis of enlightenment ... excellent poem! it certainly stirred my synapses ...
So biblical, the power in the word, especially verbalised aloud. Writing is like giving birth, definitely. And words are seed, having all of life's potential within them. Your amniotic fluid must have been visionary! :)) Love the spirit of prophecy in this too, linking what is past with what is to come. Beautiful in concept and in execution. TY Kate xx
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
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What a birth of words.
Very nice.
Blessings,
Judith
I am stunned--excellent analogy, I've used this meself, but not as brilliantly as you have. Exquisite, excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Geeeez what's wrong keep on getting a "500 internal server error" and each time I lose my comment..lol!!
Love Tinka