I get a connection by sense impressionism between Columbus' voyage, and Penelope's (Telemachus') waiting for Ulysses. Silver sea is an important connotation, which shows somebody lost and navigating in the sea of materialism/bourgeoise. But then I still have missing links in my mind.
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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
My ship is small
captain of mighty vessel
Compass in hand...Hmm has my senses working overtime...
I love the subtle (and strong!) rhythm and rhymes to this one, Dawn, both internal and external... and so goes with the sea-faring substance and metaphor of this uncharted journey. Very finely woven and crafted and you make it look deceptively easy - as any good sailor should! :)) Wonderful enduring theme and you have written classic and classy poetry here. Very well done; you inspire both admiration and a sense of quest! TY LOL Kate xx
there are those who can steer into the sea and there are those who are the compass to what lies ahead ... your poem is a union of both, in design and perspective ...
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captain of mighty vessel
Compass in hand...Hmm has my senses working overtime...
Love Tinka