In Grandma’s yard, I always looked first for twin magnolias expanding in their plot of dirt and stretching with reverence toward Southern skies.
Their knobby branches bore fruit of flower, suggesting slightest scent of assurance, declaration of their belonging to this place and time, to these people who would strip them, deny grand splendor and glorious revival, hard-earned in this suburban soil so removed from context of their creation and from the cultivation of hardy spirit coursing through their aging limbs.
Cancer claimed Grandma, my strong and shining hope, when I was only just beginning to entwine my arms with hers, to find some way to grow again in spite of unfavorable ground and too much rain. Slowly, I straightened, my grief assuaged in part by two magnolias, standing sure together, blossoms unfolding from between tough leaves, darkest green.
Accustomed to their quiet prominence, how was I to know that one day a neighbor would come with kindness and chain saws to cut the magnolias down.
This is just something. I don't know why Dawn, but often when something really moves me I dont' know what to say. This is one of those times. ~~Nordette
Your poetry evokes intense emotion in me. You are special and unique that way. I don't know of any poet who makes my heart hurt, beat and leap the way your you do. This is beautiful and painful.
Dawn the reality and the metaphor combined to make this an exceptional piece of poetry! I truly love the construct of this
poem, and the last lines ...oh so painful, and so perfect
Awesome!
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
peace,
Carolyn
poem, and the last lines ...oh so painful, and so perfect
Awesome!
Love,
Eileen