Exceptional, Dawn. With few lines and well-chosen words you have done an excellent and sharp character portrait that is cleverly couched in the "self". BOTH personalities are enigmatic and strong! Brilliant, thank you. Kate xx
It takes a steady hand and nerves of steel to calm a storm in life Dawn
And we receive all these supernatural gifts from the Creator !
Beautifully crafted and stylish poem
Peter
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
as my voice again,
hidden in whirlwind
the above stanza resonates..
grand write Dawn..
Vesna
Love Tinka
as my voice again,
hidden in whirlwind
Heart-wrenching and wonderfully crafted poem.
Inspiring verse, vividly imaged and felt; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
and gladdens the soul!
Eileen
And we receive all these supernatural gifts from the Creator !
Beautifully crafted and stylish poem
Peter