The theme of this poem is a real struggle to live with. I'm reminded of the lukewarm being, "spewed out of His mouth!" Those who can't take time to get it right,but assume a "reasonable facsimile" ,just don't get it! They aren't going to make it.Sad fact,and your frustration is valid!Superb write Dawn!
Oooooo - can so relate to this one, Dawn. Don't you just hate it when some seem content to settle into a comfortable minimalist life - and most blokes only ever communicate on a "need-to-know" basis anyways. Great expression of understated and controlled frustration here. The scene-setting of your poem makes me think that perhaps your subject has nothing to say anyway... rather than a supposed lack of trust. You have penned well that some just get totally under your skin for what it is they DON'T do rather than what it is they do. Great extended metaphor here. TY and bless you, Kate xx
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka
Such a beautiful word in every way!
Powerful write!!
Love, Suzie :-D
love this resonate write, dawn. a pleasure as always.
peace,
carolyn
Take care,
Sherry
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)