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Duplication
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Your life as I know it now has been reduced
to making copies of the real thing.

You are a man left, looking to a machine
to streamline, solidify, simplify.

In its presence you find refuge from the whir
of questions that might if you listen lead you
by the long road to your life.

Your heart asks you again but you run to seek
comfort in copied bits and pieces
of somebody else’s answers.

Afraid of the original truth, you live instead
the facsimile life and convince yourself
you are good, you are well.

Like the silent phone calls you place to me
while making copies, like all you never
find the words to say, it is

Mere duplication, superfluous, unnecessary,
and serves no useful purpose.

Break out of the mold of mind that has you
marching to duty’s distorted call.

Find ink and words and voice. Believe
you have a choice to express
original conviction.

Live without rigid restriction, and make
some statement of authenticity.
Trust enough to talk to me.


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 Reviews of "Duplication"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 18, 2006
The theme of this poem is a real struggle to live with. I'm reminded of the lukewarm being, "spewed out of His mouth!" Those who can't take time to get it right,but assume a "reasonable facsimile" ,just don't get it! They aren't going to make it.Sad fact,and your frustration is valid!Superb write Dawn!

Reviewed on July 18, 2006
What an opening line, Dawn, it draws the reader in and makes them think about their own life--this one is BRILLIANT!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on July 18, 2006
Talking to someone demands some sort of a courage and he must be brave enought to face it if things have to get right. Beautiful poem

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 18, 2006
Oooooo - can so relate to this one, Dawn. Don't you just hate it when some seem content to settle into a comfortable minimalist life - and most blokes only ever communicate on a "need-to-know" basis anyways. Great expression of understated and controlled frustration here. The scene-setting of your poem makes me think that perhaps your subject has nothing to say anyway... rather than a supposed lack of trust. You have penned well that some just get totally under your skin for what it is they DON'T do rather than what it is they do. Great extended metaphor here. TY and bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 18, 2006
VerY well Written.....something I can relate to!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on July 17, 2006
Yes, yes authenticity is what it's all about!!
Such a beautiful word in every way!
Powerful write!!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 17, 2006
a soul in search of authenticity is a wonder to behold...
love this resonate write, dawn. a pleasure as always.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 17, 2006
This strikes a familiar cord for all who read it, Dawn. Nice work!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on July 17, 2006
The real thing is always better...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2006
Woe, I can so relate. It is very well delivered....


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