Love the steady, step-by-step pacing in this write, Dawn... like making your way down a long corridor in the dark. Seems very Indianna Jones to me... before he strikes the match! :)) Methinks you are about to discover the Secret of What Lies Within... receive it gladly. Great write - full of atmosphere. Love it. TY Kate xx
what I need to live" seems to suggest that you are compelled to seek the positive energy that emanates from everything and explores into all ... excellent poem of overcoming your fears and doubts ...
Reviewed by Christine Christine (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2006
I agree excellent poem
"Exploration into all
is all that I must give,
ready to receive only
what I need to live"
Amen to this powerful poem that shows how determination floors the bully of fear! You know the tools to use, but more imprtantly you use them!!!Exceptional poem!
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"What can I think and do today that I have been too scared
to even consider before?"
what I need to live" seems to suggest that you are compelled to seek the positive energy that emanates from everything and explores into all ... excellent poem of overcoming your fears and doubts ...
"Exploration into all
is all that I must give,
ready to receive only
what I need to live"