Beautiful sustained metaphor here, Dawn, that is so tender as well as grippingly powerful and full of heated passion. An awesome tribute to a minor deity, a planet, a person... or all three, in your devoted eyes! Gorgeous humility and sincerity in classic and epic couplets. TY K xx
Beautiful images grace your inspiring verses, Dawn. This is outstanding and only when we understand that the light is a gift will we ever truly appreciate its warmth, its love and its strength.
Take care,
Sherry
This red sun should be painted on a lampshade and the lamp never turned off, Dawn...as a tribute to Resplendent One...a Hallmark verse...shine on and on...
"Resplendent One"
A visionary beauty!
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Hugs Angela
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry
A very beautiful and glorious appraisal of The Resplendent One, who shines mysteriously on the horizon of all our dreams and aspirations..
Great to read you again..
Superb work
Peter
Love Tinka
Mankind has turned into a bunch of ranting babies...
Sage
Eileen
Beautiful write indeed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)