Who would you have been living then in the collosal shadow of this partitioned present perfection -- the marionette miniature performance applauded continuously from inside the constricted circle you've drawn with precision around your shrinking life?
Is it not good that it is not ours to choose, that we've but one heart to lose in loving another rigid with remorse, set against improvisation and stuck in the groove of repetition, practicing acts of trite contrition, ever bowing to those bent on consumption of the real, dark masters of illusion?
Can we not rise above the roles, reverse the fall of crumbling columns and bare-fisted kill the pretender, that maned predator Time intent on tearing us in two from truth born free and wild in that golden expanse of yesterday's field?
Stretches now pointed ray across these futures we've embraced. A gong of decision every moment -- oh, tarry no more on your stage! Light fades and succumbs to curtained hope. I am reduced to an audience of one not interested in play anymore.
masterfully written, Dawn ... a dynamic narrative i found visually as well as emotionally stimulating ... i luv how you put it all together and the ending is just fantastic ...
Very dramatic and so well sustained, Dawn... touch of the Henrys about it!! Certainly one a Shakespearean actor could get into with relish. I love the attitude and gusto which gives the poem its tone and verve. Strong with good gestalt. I like!! :)) Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
. I am
reduced to an audience
of one not interested
in play anymore.
Will you change your mind if HE comes into your Life?..by HE I mean your Twin Flame..give hi, a chance to enter YOUR life-scenario..
Glorious piece!
Dawn it's amazing how moods strike us in different seasons and settings, isn't it? I think your next to last stanza has incredible
power, and I too wonder why we can't "rise above etc" Nonetheless beautiful work from you yet again!...ET
You pen with conviction and emotion in each memorable line; the reader doesn't read your poetry, they are the words you write. Excellent, one of your best!
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
reduced to an audience
of one not interested
in play anymore.
Will you change your mind if HE comes into your Life?..by HE I mean your Twin Flame..give hi, a chance to enter YOUR life-scenario..
Glorious piece!
Vesna:)
power, and I too wonder why we can't "rise above etc" Nonetheless beautiful work from you yet again!...ET
love Tinka
You pen with conviction and emotion in each memorable line; the reader doesn't read your poetry, they are the words you write. Excellent, one of your best!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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