Punctured thoughts fly from your page, splintered like thorns that pierce clean through my absolute obedience to no one, celebrated spirit of defiance.
Plainly said, you get under my skin.
Throbbing, swelling, inner discomfort grows as vulnerability is exposed. I bleed forgetfulness. Color floods my cheeks. All at once, I remember I am.
Pleasure erases pain’s trace. I surrender. Your questions lodge themselves in me, press into soft tissue, awakening me. I fold and fall open as crimson petals; priorities rearranged, essence pricked.
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Worth trying I say!!
Well expressed Dawn!!
Love Tinka
pain’s trace. I surrender <---like that as a quote
Hope it's just a little prick.. Kool writing here dawn..