Kate said it!! This is SO good. . .almost TOO good. "Exactly!" I found myself thinking before I had read far at all. You have captured the feeling so well. . .what a genius! MORE! M O R E !!
'Pea' <3
Chilling and oh so real. Surreal, in fact, which is what it's like when forced into some such situation. Brilliant narration of events together with heightened streams of consciousness. Very well done and conceptually sharp. I like this one a lot, and it's artistically outstanding. TY K xx
Some of us are caregivers and others live within their own world not giving much thought to the plights of others. There are a lot of names for those who dote over people, making sure that they are okay, most are less than flattering. Mother Hen, Worry Wart, Nervous Nelly...the list goes on and on. I does seem that those who spend so much time looking after others are often left alone to survive their personal crises. Nice poem!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2007
We as humans worry, and fear can consume us if we allow it to. A great write Dawn, God Bless, Holly.
That is one of my biggest fears...to be in a crash on a cold rainy day bleeding to death!!
But I know that is not the kinda crash you are refering too...hope all is fine and this is just poetry....I know I feel like I have crashed inot a bloody tree today...life can be a stinky at times sis!!
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Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
A wonderful heart felt write, thank you for sharing
'Pea' <3
exciting and interesting
life
enjoyed!!
Take care,
Sherry
Regis
will there be anyone there for our needs.
Thanks for sharing,excellent write,
God Bless,
Michael
But I know that is not the kinda crash you are refering too...hope all is fine and this is just poetry....I know I feel like I have crashed inot a bloody tree today...life can be a stinky at times sis!!
Take care okay!!
love Tinka
I pray this finds you well..........what a metaphor--comparing life to a car wreck! Brilliant. You're in my prayers--definately saving this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.