a meandering mess of a poem I couldn't bring myself to change... Dawn
Urgent chirps, sweet, sad songs -- morning birds bring news of you, love.
And so I speak vast thoughts into this void between us, this chasm, and believe you will know I know and will allow me to hold you through it, even from the other side of what used to be your life.
You have been asleep but will awaken to the sound of urgent chirps turned to chipper conversations and long-lost melodies that remind you of life in another key.
You stand now and face this ominous fork in the road. With a maestro's grand sweep, you must lay everything on the line, with swift downstroke move confidently, following note by note to the place where a symphony of hope swells within you and around you.
You will sing again, love, and move like music itself into waiting spaces. And when we meet in that place where music lives, we will dance again and marvel at the urgent chirps and sweet sad songs that led us to build the bridge upon which we will stand. Until then I will breathe into the heart of all this pain and soothe this silence with my love.
I'll chirpy, chirpy, cheap, cheap, along with Jude... I think this paints a beautiful picture in a kind of bird-language, Dawn, moving lightly from branch to branch. Your thoughts echo the spontaneity of their movement, and we can see their passage as you go. Higgledy piggledy is entirely fitting. Glad you went with your instinct, rather than kill it! Your poet's heart prevailed. Good one! TY Kate xx
this poem is receptive to the emotional music of your muse and attuned to the motion of its direction while unleashing the sentiment you endeavor to acknowledge and willingness to pursue ... i wouldn't change it either, Dawn ...
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nice....Art Sun...
I absolutely love this concept! Let us tune our hearts and minds and souls to the glorious symphony of Creation!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reindeer
Love,
Eileen
Carmen :-)
Meandering mess? Where?? I like it--resonated deeply in my soul. Yes. I really like this one. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.