We have arrived at the crest of a hill we have longed to see.
Perfectly poised for the ride of our lives, we anticipate sharing the joy of the journey, having finally understood that time and distance, the weight of sadness and separation, cannot claim our soul commitment to one another.
It is now. We are here, gaining momentum, lifting our arms to rejoice in a moment's exhilaration, knowing that through the twists and turns we will remain in spirit side by side, slightly amused by place where time stands still and flies back 'round again.
This moment repeats, anticipation replicated even after we thought we'd had the last thrill, that life had nothing left to give us. While we may wonder whether anyone's left to believe us, neither of us can wait to tell everyone --
We have arrived but have only just begun to celebrate life's ride.
ADORE this, Dawn!! Reminds me of the hysterical carousel ride I enjoyed with Andy and Paul in Covent Garden last summer... bet no-one would believe THAT, either!! :)) And, yes, very amusing!
knowing that
through the twists and turns we will remain
in spirit side by side, slightly amused
by place where time stands still
and flies back 'round again.
You've captured that "giddy" feel so well with these lines. Makes me feel whoopsadaisy just to think about it! Love the concepts and expressions in this poem. Unique and very concrete. TY Kate xx
The anticipation, the journey over life's hills and valleys is so much more enjoyable when you have someone right beside you for the ride. A joyous celebration, your words, thank you!
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
knowing that
through the twists and turns we will remain
in spirit side by side, slightly amused
by place where time stands still
and flies back 'round again.
You've captured that "giddy" feel so well with these lines. Makes me feel whoopsadaisy just to think about it! Love the concepts and expressions in this poem. Unique and very concrete. TY Kate xx
superb offering, Dawn ...
Love,
Eileen
The anticipation, the journey over life's hills and valleys is so much more enjoyable when you have someone right beside you for the ride. A joyous celebration, your words, thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Carmen
Love Tinka