Talking heads say "perhaps now," now
that I (the Uncle pointing fingers everywhere but
at the heart he sold for a stake in maybe millions),
now that I have borrowed what you do not have
it will all work itself out. In time
reason will return to a market
shaken and stirred silly.
The days are dark.
Uncertainty roars through silent streets
and the rip current ramifications of greed lead
to collapsing faith in free market enterprise.
I long for a walk in the rain, remembrance
of the pure moment where everything I ever hoped
to believe in I saw reflected in your eyes. The trust
you bestowed upon me then, when you chose
to set aside for a moment the noise
of life's exchange floor, gave me an
investment that's recession-proof,
solid soul truth that shines a light.
Certainty calls me forward through the din.
The gentle wave of something greater carries me
onward, sending stock in you soaring skyward.
Oh, I know you have lost the moment
and the man you were; and you believe in
nothing more than the ever-after and the here
and now. That was then. Now winds gather.
A storm brews. You are afraid it is too late
to dare to sail tempestuous seas. Afraid to lose
what you have, you clutch treasure to your chest
and blind your eyes to what your soul
showed you so clearly once.
Ambiguity enshrouds. You stumble through
gathering fog. You close your eyes and see me, green
ocean promise, secure in endless love for you.
I see this on a couple of levels-- I love it when a writer writes like that (see anessa blaine's three-fold poetry-- intimacy, spirituality, life)... anyhow, it is pure wisdom for all of us to put our stock in family and friends--there, our investments will continue to attain value (and values--too underrated theses days). You're spot-on with your analogy here. --Charlie
It took me several readings to get the full depth of this poem... Your poetry has such richness and fullness to it. I think my favorite stanza is the third one... "I long to walk in the rain..." I think we all have those moments of nostalgia where we wish for simpler times. Too bad we don't recognize those simpler times as such until they are gone...
Sadly ambiguity enshrouds much right now...if only we could have faith instead.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Sadly ambiguity enshrouds much right now...if only we could have faith instead.
Cryssa