When the one who has been adored
and propped up on a pedestal
with full and willing consent
of many others
is exposed,
revealed
as nothing at all
related to what you had presumed
to be truth because you trusted what
was spoon fed to you rather than discern:
void, of course.
And then—
a thousand stars are born within, at last
set free and spinning in proper orbit
around their central sun, shining soul
where you had seen or been shown
only a hole,
echo chamber,
the lonely ever in between.
Yet, what is seen cannot be unseen
and pierced by truth you must choose
to bury yourself or to be born anew.
I agree with Aberjhani. It's amazing what kind of blinders those who are followers seem to have, not realizing the danger in following so many who have nothing to offer except to take.
When we free ourselves from being convinced by such hollow promises, we are indeed free from all that.
A powerful metaphorical illustration of what this reader interprets as an act of self-liberation, or self-actualization. Genuine discernment can be a difficult thing to exercise in societies where one is frequently conditioned on public and personal levels to live as someone else's interpretation of who or what you can or should be. Enjoyed the read.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
When we free ourselves from being convinced by such hollow promises, we are indeed free from all that.
Ron