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Taking E.T. Waldron's challenge
by Rebecca Lerwill → (All Poetry by Rebecca Lerwill)
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Holy smokes, that was tough. - But fun!
I can't wait so see someone else taking the challenge!
(Photo was copied from E.T. Waldron's page)
Addage: I'm not sure if I was supposed to pick my own topic or go with Eileen's. Maybe someone could educate me, lol.


Poem Artwork

people mingle here
it is the place to be seen
and anticipate

you smile
I hold my breath
as you capture my eyes
and trigger sensation and warmth
inside

you ask me to dance
and guide me to the juke box
with just one quarter,
and the push of a button
we sway to old-time love songs

holding me close and tender
a heated touch you render
which leads me to surrender

I’m not like Eileen
don’t want to be a good girl
I’m taking you home…

LOL, sorry E.T

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Taking E.T. Waldron's challenge"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
I’m not like Eileen
don’t want to be a good girl
I’m taking you home…

I just read E.T.s. And now, I read this. LOL, Indeed!!

Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
You out did my challenge response as well. I'm impressed, flows very smoothly and articulate. Great write!

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
good job and good for you to step up to that challenge

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I like it very much
Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Nice to find a keeper - if only for the night. LOL

Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Becca,so glad you took the challenge, thank you! I'm awed by your response, you did better than me!;-) So did Ed!Truly you made it fun and your final senryu is fantastic! I love it!;-) You could have used any theme and pic,as long as you followed the forms.Thanks for the laugh about the Tanka! that is hilarious;-)lol!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I didn't see Eileen's challenge but this write sure brought me to a place and time I wouldn't mind being...also I love slow dancing...pick me, pick me! LOL
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
LOL love it! Yes, Yes!

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Cute response to the challenge. Thanks for the smile.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
LOL some guys do get lucky.

Reviewed on January 18, 2008
LOL, Rebecca, a fantastic response to Eileen's challenge, with a bit of mischieviousness (spelling?) at the end--what a twist! Enjoyed.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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