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Slow down! (Nonet)
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while life speeds away on fast forward
and love has been ment into blur
control's a thing of the past
as we begin to spin
with velocity -
out of control,
without brakes
we land
hard.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Slow down! (Nonet)"
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 29, 2008
A great slice of true of poetry!

Where does time go?
Please tell me.
I want to know.

Blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 27, 2008
and achingly remount for moore
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed on August 20, 2008
WE do, but I hope it slowwwwwwwwwwww down for you!
as you STOP to smell the roses along the way
without delay
while love joins you two
under a colorful rainbow of a pastel hue.
WRITE-ON1
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 17, 2008
Indeed we do......

Walt

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
-- time exists only in the minds of mankind -- and as such is a relative value -- in the society of today we have given time the status of an entity -- interesting, don't you think? -- and speaking of intersting, your poem is quite a thought provoker that I thoroughly enjoyed -- may the time that is yours, be enjoyed and utilized with purpose -- JMW

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
sounds just like falling in love!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Excellent clarity in this message poem, Becca! ET

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Couldn't you just pretend, sometime, that time doesn't really exist?

S

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Becca, I think I have had the wrong tape doing the fast forward because I just went past tax-return-day twice on rewind.
I will you know when I land how hard it was...

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Love this one Becca and it has such a strong potential with a lingering message that we should all take to heart. Not sure about the wording on second line "ment into blur". Other than that perfect as usual my cowgirl friend.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Great message here, Rebecca; so nice to see you here; you've been missed! Welcome home!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Great advice with this poem!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on August 11, 2008
Ouch, felt this one. Need to slow down ... excellent advice with impact. =]

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Welcome home: you've been missed!


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