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Raining In My Heart
by Jenni Kalicharan → (All Poetry by Jenni Kalicharan)
  
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Although I didn't plan on staying here, some kind soul encouraged me to stay... Thank you, Andy. I hope I will be able to keep up with you guys...

~~xXx~~

~~xXx~~

It's raining heavily in my heart,
Ever since we've been apart.
The sun no longer shines for me,
As I sit and stare at the wide open sea.
The sea that separates us by so many miles
The sea that once brought us so many smiles.

We used to sail the high seas together...
Enjoyed it both in the lightning and the thunder.
We'd sail around the islands so grand,
Never caring if we ever again touched land.
Until that fateful day, when I looked into your eyes..
As we both said our own silent goodbyes...

Ten years ago you went to your watery grave,
Every ounce of strength that day I gave,
I tried my best to save you from your death,
Now all I have today is great regret.
We should not have tempted fate that morn,
We should have stayed at home and watched the storm.

Today, all I hear is the thunder from within me,
As I think of you lying there under the sea.
I now sit all alone on the sea-shore,
Not daring to venture on a boat anymore.
Trying to shelter myself from my tears,
As I think of all the wasted years.

The years we could have still been together,
If only we had been as tough as leather.
Instead we both turned soft and opted to sail..
That day my entire body went pale.
Now, the sun no longer shines for me,
It's raining heavily in my heart, you see.


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 Reviews of "Raining In My Heart"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Beautiful yet sad...keep in mind that the excursion that day was something that would have brought much pleasure even though it turned bad in the end...it should not detract from the love of doing something that is highly enjoyed.
Amor

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Good verses yet sad write what a tragedy

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
This is very poignant a beautiful, Jenni.
I am SO glad that you're staying.
Love and hugs
Chrissie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
This is wonderful Jenni, I'm so glad you are staying.

Reviewed on May 25, 2003
((((JENNI)))) so glad you can stay here at the den; wonderful man that andy is! a lovely write! (((HUGS))) and love, your american friend, karen lynn. :D (big grins, 'cause you're staying here! :) )

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
HEY Sweetie YEA}}}}
{{{SO glad he did convience you}}
Thankyou Sir Andy!!
This is so beautiful and bittersweet
Love ya
Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Oh! Girl you touched my heart with this one....sorry for your pain okay!!

I am so glad you gonna stay!!
Yippeeeee!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2003
So glad your staying.
You're so modest.
Sad words expressed with beauty..

Reviewed on May 24, 2003
This was so beautifully sad, just touched me so deeply tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Bravo Jenni! A gorgeous poem, you are among peers, we are equal here;-)you have been here longer than many, so glad you are staying.

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
{{Hi sweet light Jenny,
SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad you are staying, sweety..!! Andy is a doll, isn't he??Love to see your work and you back!!!

Love, Dove

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Beautifully done. A gem. Glad you are going to hang around here. You would be missed.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
You sometimes surpass even the very best at what you do.

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
jenni,
simply beautiful
glad you're staying
good write

john+

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Oh Lady, you don't have to keep up with anyone. Just do the best you can do, or read and write when you feel like it. I'm sure glad you decided to stay. Thanks for staying and a big thank you to your sponsor.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Touchs the heart in a very sad way. Wonderful write.

Glad your back :-)


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