Broken Wings (poem) by Jenni Kalicharan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2003

This poem flows through the waves of the sea of life by the shores of emotions.

"Broken Wings" is a composition dictated by the heart of the soul, and poetized with words that pictures the true emotions of life.

May the Author enjoy a blissful healthy life.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

This was so painful to read, excellent and so moving, it seems many have been there, I know I have, I hope things get better for you,

Reindeer

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

Jenni, this is very sad and I'm hoping that your heart will heal soon and you will be able to "soar" once again through your words. Thank you for sharing and may God bless!

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

jen,
we write from the heart,
when we hurt our writing hurts,
when we laugh our writing laughs,
'tis the nature of poets and th ere work.
we write the poem we are the poem...
thins will change and change again
and you will endure and triumph

love & hugs

john+

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

((((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))) here's hoping for happier days ahead! i kow; i know how it is with depression. hang in there; you are in my prayers! sad, haertbreaking write! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

This is lovely Jenni,keep writing Girl, take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

Jenni,

This splendid piece shows that you are well on your way back!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

Many can relate I'm sure, Jenni...I certainly can. You've expressed yourself so beautifully here ...just keep on writing from your heart.
{{{HUG}}}
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

Jenni your poetry always soars, and this poem only goes to prove that you can still write it as good as ever
i do hope things starrt to look up soon for you
your friend
steve

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 25, 2003

welcome to my world Jenni!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

OHHHHHHHH Jenni,
I can relate been there..
{{{HUGS}}}}}
This was so touching sweetie.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

awwwwwwwww.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Hugs....excellent write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Jenni no matter how you feel you always seem to have the strength to overcome. This write is proof of your great steadfast powers;-)Very beautifully expressed!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Jenni you have proven what I have always held to be true, even in our most "slumped times" it seems we can send out the very bestest of writes...Excellant Piece Jenni!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Jenni, I agree with La Belle, just type what you're feeling at the moment, even if it's the butter you forgot at the supermarket

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Wow! Now this is an excellent write Jenni. Your just in a slump. Your incredible thoughts will come back sooner than you think.
Your friend...........Ron

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

This is a beautiful write, you are more free than you know. Write what is in your heart be it joy or pain and it will live. Hope things are better soon.

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Those broken wings need a lending hand,
And tender care,
A little attention the will demand,
To get them once again fair.
Yet a doctor's aid,
Is closer than can be seen,
So don't be afraid,
Their soft, glowing sheen,
And that soft smile,
Will soon again shine,
But don't be sad all the while,
Hunny, that job is MINE! ;)

Great write :) I enjoyed, and can't say I'm not on the same boat. :)
Cheers,
~Kari~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

Hey you and me both babe, greeat write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2003

HUGS! Very painful write and I hope it helps.