I have been feeling so depressed of late, I haven't been in a mood to create, My mind is now close to a blank page, I'm afraid I'm almost at the final stage.
My spirit has been, to pieces, crushed. All my thoughts seem to be hushed. The words that once seemed to flow, Now come to me ever so slow.
How can I rid myself of the pain? Will my poetry ever soar again? Will my broken wings ever heal? I want once again to begin to feel.
I only want to be free once more, Free to write about people I adore. Free to write what is in my heart, Free to express myself through my art.
To do this I must let go of the hurt, And my sadness to joy, revert. Only then will I be able to fly, And not have to tell my friends goodbye.
I will then begin to soar again, No longer will I have to practice restrain. My broken wings will soon begin to heal, And I will once again begin to feel.
Jenni, this is very sad and I'm hoping that your heart will heal soon and you will be able to "soar" once again through your words. Thank you for sharing and may God bless!
jen,
we write from the heart,
when we hurt our writing hurts,
when we laugh our writing laughs,
'tis the nature of poets and th ere work.
we write the poem we are the poem...
thins will change and change again
and you will endure and triumph
((((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))) here's hoping for happier days ahead! i kow; i know how it is with depression. hang in there; you are in my prayers! sad, haertbreaking write! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
This is lovely Jenni,keep writing Girl, take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Jenni,
This splendid piece shows that you are well on your way back!
Many can relate I'm sure, Jenni...I certainly can. You've expressed yourself so beautifully here ...just keep on writing from your heart.
{{{HUG}}}
~Chrissie
Jenni your poetry always soars, and this poem only goes to prove that you can still write it as good as ever
i do hope things starrt to look up soon for you
your friend
steve
Jenni no matter how you feel you always seem to have the strength to overcome. This write is proof of your great steadfast powers;-)Very beautifully expressed!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Jenni you have proven what I have always held to be true, even in our most "slumped times" it seems we can send out the very bestest of writes...Excellant Piece Jenni!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Jenni, I agree with La Belle, just type what you're feeling at the moment, even if it's the butter you forgot at the supermarket
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Wow! Now this is an excellent write Jenni. Your just in a slump. Your incredible thoughts will come back sooner than you think.
Your friend...........Ron
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
This is a beautiful write, you are more free than you know. Write what is in your heart be it joy or pain and it will live. Hope things are better soon.
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Those broken wings need a lending hand,
And tender care,
A little attention the will demand,
To get them once again fair.
Yet a doctor's aid,
Is closer than can be seen,
So don't be afraid,
Their soft, glowing sheen,
And that soft smile,
Will soon again shine,
But don't be sad all the while,
Hunny, that job is MINE! ;)
Great write :) I enjoyed, and can't say I'm not on the same boat. :)
Cheers,
~Kari~
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"Broken Wings" is a composition dictated by the heart of the soul, and poetized with words that pictures the true emotions of life.
May the Author enjoy a blissful healthy life.
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we write from the heart,
when we hurt our writing hurts,
when we laugh our writing laughs,
'tis the nature of poets and th ere work.
we write the poem we are the poem...
thins will change and change again
and you will endure and triumph
love & hugs
john+
This splendid piece shows that you are well on your way back!
~Joseph
{{{HUG}}}
~Chrissie
i do hope things starrt to look up soon for you
your friend
steve
Love
Tinka
I can relate been there..
{{{HUGS}}}}}
This was so touching sweetie.
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Your friend...........Ron
And tender care,
A little attention the will demand,
To get them once again fair.
Yet a doctor's aid,
Is closer than can be seen,
So don't be afraid,
Their soft, glowing sheen,
And that soft smile,
Will soon again shine,
But don't be sad all the while,
Hunny, that job is MINE! ;)
Great write :) I enjoyed, and can't say I'm not on the same boat. :)
Cheers,
~Kari~