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In A Coma
by Jenni Kalicharan → (All Poetry by Jenni Kalicharan)
  
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~~xXx~~


Lying here in a coma, watching as you stare.


I wasn't sure till now that you really did care.


 


I listen as you pour your heart out to me.


Asking how you could have been too blind to see.


 


I hear you say my smiles you will miss,


And that you wish you’d given me one last kiss.


 


You say you’re sorry for causing me pain


And for being the reason I was on that train.


 


I see the hurt that you tried so hard to disguise,


I see it all so clearly in your beautiful brown eyes.


 


Why did it take a disaster to bring you to your senses?


You say now, you’re ready to mend all the fences.


 


You admit you were afraid to speak your mind,


But a true r love you could never find.


 


I watch as you get down on your knees,


“Oh God, allow her live for me, please.”


 


This touches me to my very core


And makes me want to go on living some more.


 


I wish I could tell you there is nothing to forgive,


For you have once more given me the will to live.


~~xXx~~


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 Reviews of "In A Coma"
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
excellent write, jenni; well done! (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 25, 2003
Oh Jenni, you had me on the edge!
Excellent poem! Brava!
*Applause*

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Lying here in a coma, watching as you stare.

WOW this opening had me mesmerized! Your poetry is always so passionate and moving. Your work is truly excellent!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Very moving work, Jenni.
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Brilliant work.. very insightful!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Beautifully written piece, Jenni. Very profound and insightful.
Amor

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Powerful and sad Jenni

Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Excelleent write and viewpoint!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
jenni,
an interesting POV
very ceative

good write

john+

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Hell of a pome.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Most excellent emotive write Jenni!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Sad as can be my friend...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Very real and sad.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
This was too real for me!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Outstanding! You portrayed the emotions well..~Z~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
You really captured this moment Jenni, a touching and deeply felt poem...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
I like the way you did this Jenni. Very nice!!

Jack


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