Saberi, first i want to extend my sincere thanks for your comment on my poetry. In compliment I am so pleased to discover yours. At the risk of being too woman in this thread of male comments, I have to say Autoerotic is to me a vivid manifestation of mental perfection artisticly defined and embodied and greatly enjoyed by this reader. If only I could have written this one! Truly awesome work!
~Taylor
Even thoughts tend to escape the realistic flow of expression...yours show this a new word becomes the autoerotic escape displayed and or...as you say... manifested at night...
The emotional planning or foresight can be deceitful in our own hearts knowledge. Agitations can be inflamed by so many venues of loves beholder, until one is stricken by the force of ones desire.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
mmmm, your work exudes wonder and polish; this, although the title would suggest otherwise, seemed almost on 'auto pilot', as if the subject is withdrawn from the activity, disinterested, cyber-kinetic. . .. as if someone was writing poetry without feeling the ink under their fingers, a painter who could care less about the brush or canvas. . .. meaningless.. .. love without reality, or at least a realness.. ..
just my voodoo doll interpretation of course. ..
a wonder.full write
ness
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~Taylor
enjoyed much
William
Richard
nice work.....
Art Sun...
Love,
Eileen
just my voodoo doll interpretation of course. ..
a wonder.full write
ness
Kathy
What incredible images, what incredible lines: well done, Saberi!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Almost like a bellydance. :)
Regis