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Inappropriate Response
by larry r linville → (All Poetry by larry r linville)
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do you get those unwanted recorded calls that want to see you something and can't say anything to them?


Telephone rang – I said, “Hello.”
A woman spoke – she wasn’t human
I was listening to a machine.
She could save me some money.
Who doesn’t want to save?
Only 6% interest on my credit card.

Red flags were flying.
Is she phishing?
Does she want my identity?
My defenses stood up like quills on a porcupine.
“If you want to hear more, punch number nine”
Will they rip me off?
“If you want removed, punch eight.”
I learn – even if it’s slowly
So I punched that number eight.
“That was an inappropriate response” she said.
Selections were repeated.
One again I chose number eight.
One again – “an inappropriate response.”

As I ended this call I wondered
Is this like the messages of the church?
Do they choose the right words and right answers?
If they make the wrong choice do they lose?

How many people don’t say what we want
And we tell them they are inappropriate?
Is it the things that they say?
Or the way that they look?
Do they just not fit in?

Jesus always gave people a choice --
Even when they were wrong
He said, “you are not far from the kingdom..”
If his kingdom is to come as he said in that prayer
It won’t be done by controlling their thoughts.

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Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
eliminate your land line phone and only use cell service....no more telemarketers!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Very good analogy and I do believe that it what many have become today. I refer to it as being pre-programmed. It does not matter much what you say, the other person is pre-programmed to return with the same response, like reading off a Q-card.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
As usual, you give me much to contemplate.

Kathy

Reviewed on October 10, 2007
SPOT ON!

I did telemarketing for 7 years: when someone said they weren't interested, I'd thank them for their time AND HANG UP. No rebutting; no arguing; would tick off my boss, though. Look: I already made 'em mad by calling, why argue? I'd get my sales, by being polite. Got tired of the lies, the rudeness of customers, so I don't do that anymore. THANK GOD.

Now you have computers doing the dirty work: just. Hang. Up!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

An excellent write, by the way, to be wary of all callers, 'specially ones you don't know.

Reviewed on October 10, 2007
GReat pOem Larry!
YES! those #'s are annoying, VERY!
The good lord gave us a Will! and Thank God, we can choose for ourselves! and not be "forced" to do what others say or tell us to do!
Love the freedom of choice!
STay Positive!
HAPPY and STrong, if you want...
Much love and Warmer hugs, WArrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Don't those automated phone messages or calls annoy the *beep* outta you? They sure do me! What's worse is when they say "Press 1 for English, press 2 for Spanish"! This is AMERICA, NOT *beeping* Mexico!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Still all in all, a good write; very well done, Larry!!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
LOL...Larry, hold out for a better rate.

Walt


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