The slave girl who asked Peter if he was with Jesus tells what she experienced on that night of trial and weeks later.
Just a slave girl and yet I saw him there.
I asked him if he was with him that night.
He denied it all and I heard him swear
because he seemed to answer from great fright.
Two more times he was asked and he denied.
His face demonstrated grimace and pain.
With each question it seemed he almost cried
and his body kept showing such great strain.
I’d never heard a cock crow there before
but it was very loud and clear that day.
When he heard it he stood there in great horror
and then he turned and quickly ran away.
Weeks later he came and beckoned to me.
I remembered who he was at first sight.
He said, “I was with him” and I am free
from the denials I gave on that night.
I asked if he’d give me the reason
he had been able to change so much.
He said he’s forgiven from his treason
and he reached out and gave me a touch.
It felt just like Jesus had touched me
and my life was filled with great power.
I’ve never in my life felt so free
as I did in that life-changing hour.
As I read this from 'her' perspective and Peter's subsequent apology - it crossed my mind -- How many times have I unwittingly denied Him? I am blessed in knowing that He forgives me. Yet, I think I need to do some soul searching [as this one tugs at my heart].
Intriguing and fulfilling storie about the three times negation of Peter...and then there was one with a sword cutting off a ear...
Larry, you are really filling up the empty spaces.
Bravo!!!
This poem reminds me of my poem "The witness." You've really captured my attention and held it till the end.
Awesome!
Reviewed by Tavia McDowell (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Wow! This was an awesome write! We all have sinned like Peter, but I'm glad God is a forgiving God! Thank you for the vision you've shared.
Tavia
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Ah, yes indeed, before the cock crows . . . A wonderful passage in the Bible I have always thought . . . To me is signifies man's inability to stand up to his own convictions when in a difficult situation, or at least an awkward one . . . You are giving up some very meaningful poetry these days, my friend . . .
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God bless you. Kathy
Be always safe,
Karen
John
Larry, you are really filling up the empty spaces.
Bravo!!!
Georg
Awesome!
Tavia
Can you imagine how Peter felt after he denied the Lord - three times? Man. I don't think I could live with the guilt - excellent write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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