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Cookie Cutter Town
by larry r linville → (All Poetry by larry r linville)
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I approached a suburban town and saw the buildings at the edge where new development was taking place. But it was interrupted by an old barn.


 

 
Nearing a small growing town
of cookie cutter houses
with cookie cutter spouses
on cookie cutter streets
where manicured lawns meet.
Where cookie cutter stores
in cold monotony bores.
 
Suddenly there’s a clearing
with a barn old and white
standing alone on its site
tin roof showing brown rust
covered with a coat of dust.
No cookie cutter building here
its uniqueness very clear.
It seems so out of place
as it stands there with grace
speaking of another day
which now seems far away
when originality ruled
before our cloning cooled
finding any new expression
with the deepest discretion.
 
How refreshing that small plot
standing like a well planned slot
in the midst of imitation
lacking any new creation
calls my heart to days of yore
which never seemed to bore
like conformity today
where nothing’s done another way.
 
May that barn fill my soul
and help my faith become whole
as I try not to conform
going along with the norm.
May that clearing like God’s Word
which is so seldom heard
as we sing cookie cutter songs
and practice cookie cutter wrongs
saying cookie cutter words
like we’re cookie cutter nerds.
 
Give us an old barn now
to help us pray and show us how
to find our own unique place
to serve God and the human race.
 

 


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 Reviews of "Cookie Cutter Town"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Thank you as I feel your write was very entertaining Larry. I could vision it in front of me. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Awesome Larry. Liz

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
FANTASTIC write Larry could picture the whole cookie cutter scene...and that beautiful barn standing alone...kind of made me think of christians, their unique and sometimes not appreciated...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
It makes me think of a Sunday's Service with a congregation in starched clothes, shining shoes and well behaved children. The voice of the preacher, deep, suave like a grandfather talking to little grandchildren while on one of the pews, a homeless, old clothes shredded and in disarray, hold his head down with humility thanking his Lord.
That, for me, is the image of that old barn.

Georg



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