Your First Born ... (poem) by Kathy Armijo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Kathy this is a beautiful tribute, keep these coming, I am sorry for your loss, but I am sure he is smiling down on you from Heaven
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on May 11, 2008

a beautiful tribute. Well penned. i lost my second and last born. they were infants. One died in delivery room. One lived three days. I wish you peace and love. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

There is sadness, grief and a plethora of emotion here that I cannot even begin to imagine Kathy. The only thing I am certain of is your tremendous love for your children as evidenced by this moving tribute. May peace be always with you. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

...in all the sadness...the beauty of your recognition of one love so much...and of all whom you Mothered...is so well penned...that the memory of any time you shared with them...will never be forgotten.
John

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Wow, so heartbreaking, thanks for sharing with us all.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

I couldn't even begin to imagine how you must feel Kathy. Beautiful write Kathy. God bless you always my friend.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Heartbreaking is right. To bear such a loss is not natural. Parents are not supposed to have to bury their children and when they have to it is such a heavy loss. God Bless You. Liz

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Heartbreaking, beautifully written. I couldn't imagine . . . .couldn't imagine life without my Una.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

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Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Such a beautiful writing...you've given this reader an example of how it truly is with our "first born." This is excellent!

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Beautiful, Kathy... Simply beautiful!
I understand those feelings well...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Very beauitiful heartfelt write. Lovely and so touching. He will lead the way and be the first one to greet you. What a wonderful day that will be. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Heartfelt and sweet write for one who paved the way....

hugs

B

Reviewed by larry linville

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

so beautiful. I am a first born. My first born was a boy and the other two were girls. After reading your words I cherish my first born even more as I celebrate his 43 years. Special prayers for you as you remember one so special.

Larry

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Kathy,

Sad but Beautiful write. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

The comfort of knowing they are not alone and someday you will also get to reunite and hold them in your arms is a blessing. My heart is with you in your thoughts.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

My review of this poem is inside my poem "Kathy's Little Angels"
The world says to move on, the mother moves at her own pace.

Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

I can relate to the pain,I have it still, but I wouldn't ever want to trade the memories, they are all we have...Bless you...

Love and hugs,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

So many loving memories and the pain you have endured and are still enduring as you march forward, never leaving the past. Godspeed to you lady....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

what pain you must always hold in your heart--well written

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

My dear Kathy--Anthony Michael gave you all that and more.
He lived an entire lifetime in those nine years and left a legacy of his own.
Our own greed wishes it were longer.
I know the feeling.
Love ya--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

His Mother possesses her Star in the galexy.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

(((HUGS))) love and prayers, Kathy - so sorry -

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

(((HUGS))) And prayers!~