I love this writing; it is a very lovely piece of work, Carin. It puts me in a place, but I feel this is only metaphorical (the lightning and thunder), perhaps a broken relationship or a moment of unsatisfying decision. Whatever the meaning, it is most beautiful to read, and has opportunity for free interpretation. I love writings like that. Thank you.
Ohhhh.... The Memories We Can Carry! Your Write Is A Lovely Express Of Our Memories Which We Can Use To Torment Ourselves With.....sometimes it is hard to see the difference between a mistake & a wrong doing.
rather into the wine" a sad but very true expereience for some...
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Carin, your poem beautifully captures the pain of an event like a snapshot. The words convey the sentiment of loss of innocence and regret to a heightened degree, not unlike a purging of these feelings to promote healing. Thank you for sharing.
Wow! This is similiar to what I've been through, with a friend (girl) of 19yrs. but it ended and we work together daily. A hi is about all we share!
IN my heart I wish her well, but I believe friendship/relationships should go BOTH ways, I don't like 1-Way relationships, unless health permits it!
Your words serve many justice!
Enjoy! your healing Carin' and your Growth!
As I ALWAYS say: "There is a REASON for EVERYTHING"
and that is so true!
After awhile we find out WHY! or in your heart in time, you feel a PEACE!
Hang In!
and always listen to your heart!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeooxoo
STay Positive!
Write On!...
Carin - YOu have a way with words! :) Thank you for sharing them!
What motion this portrays Sis. Carin...saving this.
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
An interesting write, welcome to the den, Holly
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Wine won't rid us of any problems.
Detachment from attachments will, with forgiveness.
Thoughts or other people must never allow one to be manipulated.
Hi Carin! I read your poem,"In One Moment". I found it laid outa mystery to solve or the conotation was that when something tragic happens ,it is burnt into our minds ...especially if we are there when it happens. Great work! Please feel free to visit my site here in the den or at www.freewebs.com/kendoo
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Ohhhh.... The Memories We Can Carry! Your Write Is A Lovely Express Of Our Memories Which We Can Use To Torment Ourselves With.....sometimes it is hard to see the difference between a mistake & a wrong doing.
I enjoyed your poetic express!
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not through the mind,
rather into the wine" a sad but very true expereience for some...
IN my heart I wish her well, but I believe friendship/relationships should go BOTH ways, I don't like 1-Way relationships, unless health permits it!
Your words serve many justice!
Enjoy! your healing Carin' and your Growth!
As I ALWAYS say: "There is a REASON for EVERYTHING"
and that is so true!
After awhile we find out WHY! or in your heart in time, you feel a PEACE!
Hang In!
and always listen to your heart!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeooxoo
STay Positive!
Write On!...
Carin - YOu have a way with words! :) Thank you for sharing them!
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Detachment from attachments will, with forgiveness.
Thoughts or other people must never allow one to be manipulated.
Great poetic tale...
Welcome to AD!!
Love Tinka
Regis