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Dear Susie,
by Carin Spirit → (All Poetry by Carin Spirit)
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You saved me from self, now it is you that I miss

You held my hand and Guided me through the Night of Sunder

 

You remember that night, the one those others did blame.

….And for so long it brought such shame

 

You walked me in the sun, you held me near, the things only you knew

….I considered Me, One of those others.

For so long I kept the secrets buried under, for these I thought true .

 

Then you were gone………..with that same Lightening and Pain

 

You never would know the truth you did uncover, you believed when I could not,

That truth was mine ….and not those others

 

Then you were gone……… With that same Sunder and Shame

 

How could this be………..the shot for another, the one from which you would never recover, your Beautiful life taken in Vain

 

How this could be..........you always thought of others

Your Beautiful life taken by another,

Your Beautiful life… It was taken with Thunder

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How could this be………..

 

I miss you,

Love Always
 


  © 2008 Carin' Spirit

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dear Susie,"
Reviewed on December 23, 2008
This one brought tears to my eyes, I lost my best friend in Feb.07 and in many ways these lines could describe her
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
A beautiful and powerful poem,my heart goes out to you for your loss.take care and God bless you

Edwin

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 20, 2008
Beautiful in its sadness.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 3, 2008
So sad...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
I feel the sadness and loss in your words dear, Carin she will never be more then a thought and a memory away dear. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Sometimes I think there no answers. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2007
lovely words

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
A very sad, disheartening and reflective tribute to one who helped you to see the light. She remains alive in spirit through you. God Bless you....

Be safe,
Karen


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