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more often
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you never really say
what is troubling you
I’d fix it if I could
 


I see you sad
in melancholy expression
withdrawn and heart guarded
 


what could I say
what could I  do
to take the pain from you
 


what if I wrapped you snug
in a blanket of love
and took our spirits to outerspace
 


find an elixir in a silver goblet
made of intentions healing for you
poured from my own heart 
 


bathed you in rivers of
collective medicine from all
the streams of life
 


dusted you golden
from eons of stardust
ever wished upon a star
 


returning you safe
back to your body
hoping you feel refreshed
 


you are still wondrous
and a beautiful image
I wish that you could see it
 


maybe I should tell you more often


 


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 Reviews of "more often"
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on March 13, 2004
A wonderful sweet and caring write, expressed so well from the heart.
Allen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
You express such kind empathy here, Debby. Simply beautiful. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
So very caring and.......just beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
BRILLIANT use of imagery in this finely crafted poem, Debby!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
fantastic!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
A marvelous telling Debby, hanging
your heart out for him to see;-)!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
You've told it very well, Debby. Great poem.

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Such wonderful imagery this poem invokes.
My hat is off to you Poet Debby.

Reviewed on March 12, 2004
(((debby)))

*applause* nothing more i can add...beautiful, brilliant...and that last line...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we should all do that

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
"what if I wrapped you snug
in a blanket of love
and took our spirits to outerspace'

Now that's love...this is beautiful
writing Debby...loved reading it..
floria

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 12, 2004
Having been the one with the guarded heart, I can relate to this great write. Nice job!


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