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timeless unfolding
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Ventura, CA


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an irresistible need came upon me
I went to the beach
it's early in the week, so it is quieter
 


something about the mesmerizing surf
the tireless continuation
as each wave keeps coming to shore
 


leisurely today in its movement
pausing, then rising, then rolling
watching it lapping the sand
 


the sound of gulls moves my focus
and i notice two sandpipers
scurry along the now wet sand
 


instantly they multiplied into six
and then twelve sandpipers
becoming a flock moving down the beach
 


I thought of you then
and experienced a glimpse
of your hair blowing in the wind
 


I whispered sandpiper into your ear
before the moment disappeared
and I returned to this beach
 


yes, leisurely describes this time
and how perfectly beautiful it is
gracefully allowing, gently unfolding
 


delighted, as you awaken
 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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Reviewed on July 28, 2005
This POem is Beautiful Deb.. and I could gaze at Sandpipers all day long, there so intriguing with their parody on the sand and water!;) This is a keeper- I love it! The mood is moving with rhythm. Ever just walk into the waves, stand for the longest time. Get dizzy waiting for the waves to knock you over-Go way out and try it with your arms UP (not caring what/who is around)... It's a stirring feeling in the heart - It makes for great writes- ~

Let the Horizon suck me in- and the seaaaaaaaa to take me under ~
Warm HuGs2U-Lady,Sheeeoxo Enjoy! Your night!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 27, 2005
I love the mood and gentle easiness of this, Debby, in your ebbing rhythm and flow. And especially the "twist" at the end. I have Spanish poems stacked up and coming out of my ears - which will have bored everyone to death before I even get half way through them! - but this reminds me of one in the pipeline about just this delightful and intimate time of day; you capture well with this poem both the landscape and the feeling - and I love the personal motif of the meaning of the sandpipers in your very special relationship. Ty for this, Kate xx

Reviewed on July 26, 2005
A most beautiful poem, Debby; I experienced the beach with you. Richly illustrated, this write stimulates all of the senses--marvelous!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Take meeeeeeeee to the seeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaa...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Very touching poem and the imergy abounds with vibrancy. Would be kinda nice to awaken in such a loving way.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
I could hear the surf, the seabirds songs and smell the salt air, thanks for bringing me into your romantic ocean setting.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Just a lovely delightful read!!

Thanks for lifting my spirit a little!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
an excellent descriptive poem that reaches into the heart of the ocean and the soul of the surf ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
something about the mesmerizing surf

There surely is; a very captivating piece, Debby.


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