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a vision platinum
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i saw you last night, i felt you last night, you had me last night...very big smile
a mystical encounter, a lucid interaction, something amazing, and so very real
no doubt of your face or your style or intent, your passion is really extremely intense...thank you for coming..i had a ball..and now that you're in...will you stay awhile?

I looked at the bed
and the tangled sheets
in afterglow grin
and toe curling smile
 

amazing delight
magnificent ride
gold becomes platinum
you are, my kind of light
 

grace dispensed
by your loving kindness
joyfilled this heart
by your, kingdom of heaven
 

elation my morning
in praise of your spirit
kisses of gratitude
to you, sweetheart of merit
 

now drinking my coffee
a hummingbird visits
yes, I acknowledge
he feels like bliss

 
 


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 Reviews of "a vision platinum"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
Thoroughly engaging verses effectively convey and share the them, Debby. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
I feel like a cigarete and I don't even smoke.

Cool

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 6, 2005
Splendid read!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
a smooth feeling of passion runs throught his poem ... very nice!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
There is nothing quite like a hot night of passion, real or fantasized to make a poet hurry to her quill by the light of a flickering candle and relive the moment of bilss. Ya did good.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
Wow seems like i can almost see your afterglow smile breaking across cyber space in this write. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
sounds like an excellent night...and makes for a well written poem


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