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in trance
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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unpronounceable words lingered
just beyond my lips waiting for form
to unleash them upon the ridge
of your jaw below your ear lobe
 
you held me close and I watched
your face shift, transform,  blend
and merge into infinity
and there within and through your eyes
I saw another galaxy
its beauty spiraled as peace,
serenity, and calm
 

a sun appeared and its rays
caused me to squint at its brilliance
you squeezed me then and
whispered…gather its knowing
and bring it to you
 

from that place beyond
that ancient we are from
where we are and were one
then, and now, and beyond
 

unpronounceable words lingered
in a language you know
that summons your power
and retrieves my soul
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "in trance"
Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on January 17, 2006
so much said and so much more felt wonderful!
Sandi

Reviewed on January 17, 2006
What a powerful and real piece of wriiten work rom the depths o your heart to your pen on the paper and to my ears.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
Wow Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Sweet and tender like the unpronounceable words (that I can't spell,lol. You provoke and arouse the reader with visions of an erotic type of poetry, half reality and half imagery...well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
I agree. This gives the reader a sense of surreal romantic love in a galaxy far, far away. I saw imagery that was beauty, romance, love. Thnx for sahring Debby. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Excellent poem offers the reader so much I enjoyed this one the first stanza draws you in.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Debby...this is splendid!
You have created a multilayered piece here that can be read as spritual, metaphysical or sensual. Your choice of metaphor and rhythm is grand. Well done!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 11, 2006
I like this alot....many images you painted here!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka


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