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connectedness
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the morning’s spider web tickled my shoulder
with the instant startle of its stickiness
I walked under the canopy of shade
my arms immediately fanned
in an effort to avoid confrontation
of spindling legs in my hair
or destruction of its precious lair
 
cautiously I ducked, grace and delicacy
emulated knowing the encounter
need not be a dramatic throated squeal
nor a nasty poisonous bite
bending down I moved the garden hose
to the grateful hydrangea  
and watched its nurturing suckle
 
the feeling lingered and I kept
brushing my shoulder as if wisps
remained to the pleasure/pain
of the intricate web’s weaving
tickling the back of my neck
as a gentle awareness
and fearful reminder 
 
of inter connectedness


 

 

© Debby Weinberger
 
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Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
Very creative and clever symbolism. I'm sure we all can relate to spider webs but never like this before. Thanks for sharing, Gloria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
Grrrrrrrrr....not my favorite to write about those gritters...shivers....OMG I would screamed and no such nice poetry woulda come from it but a stinky mess....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 27, 2006
The sentiment of this piece was well recieved.

Having had ample encounters myself with spider webs and their impressive inhabitants, which always, whether poisonous or not, evoke some degree of respect and abhorrence, I cringed as I read these well constructed ideas and welled up inside with more than enough empathy for both of us.

Good job Poet!
Richard


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