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connected
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i'm a grain of sand along
an ocean of life wondering
how i make a difference

and yet lifted by the
smallest of breeze
my grain of sand
lands on the water
creating a ripple that
travels for miles

and maybe you are sailing
at that very moment
the ripple floats by
and rocks your boat

depending upon your
state of mind you will
gently sway or be capsized

and sometimes i know
and often i don't
my very existence
has changed what you are

and as you are affected
by the moving water
it returns back to me
now carrying your power

but i am quick
and shapeshift fast
i am a mermaid
and i breathe underwater

with swish of tail
i glide the water
finding heaven
in oceans calmer

and there is a fisherman
patiently waiting yet
dangling a line and a lure

so i shift again
into a dove
with rush of wings
i take to air

and as each wing
strokes the air
it creates the breeze
that blows your hair

*everything is connected*


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 Reviews of "connected"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2002
Beautifully done. Like that shape-shifter bit. !E

Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2002
The allure of a mermaid..All connected. Excellent

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2002
I love the way you played with the images and the connection to each image.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on June 4, 2002
what a wonderful and true write
cleverly done.....

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 4, 2002
A soaring and superbly written piece with great truths...we are all connected...you are very wise my dear...;-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 4, 2002
as everyone said, this is wonderful.

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2002
I LOVEDDDDDD this one!! Especially these lines:

i'm a grain of sand along
an ocean of life wondering
how i make a difference

Wonderful piece Debby!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2002
everything is connected as i am to this poem
Very good

Reviewed on June 4, 2002
Very nice, Debbie!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on June 3, 2002
Yes...! Collectively alltogether as the web of life..Beautiful healing light work from a beautiful evolved soul...!!!Teacher of light...

Love and light, Jo

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 3, 2002
Wonderful poetry... beautiful ending.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 3, 2002
nice catch...

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 3, 2002
Good write..good flow of words


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