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the watcher
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yesterday i took a mind journey, this poem and the video creation were an attempt to visualize what it was like


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the watcher knows
and stands beyond
the wisdom of our time on earth
 
stealth
lurking beyond current thought
to seek you hide
conjunct this gate
enter  
show your radiance
and shaft of light
 
there is compassion
let me accept
all that is
let me feel complete
 
you wander not in human logic
existing in the ethers
the place beyond this
pretend world
in a place you know as real 
 
objectively
with no human language tool
you leave me with impressions
of your dynamic intelligence
lost to the realms of our origin
 
where my existence
is only because you thought

 


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 Reviews of "the watcher"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
one can find many wonders of new thought and views if only one lets their thoughts join with others....

a nice work.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
we were created so the watcher could view the totality of its creation through our eyes ...

sage write, Debby ...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
A thought provoking write...enjoyed...well written my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

A poetic-philosophic exercise that makes me ignite the turbines of imagination... "the watcher" is a stimulating striking thoughts' piece.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Mind tingling write!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
THIS poem is a thinking poem Debby.. I have been there done that...M

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
good one

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Can relate to this entirely, Debby, but wouldn't have known where to start in terms of putting it into words... and pictures!! :)) Like a shadow presence, sometimes I feel that my mind and existance are not my own but are the conscious will of a Greater Being living through me... were S/He/It not to exist... well, perish the thought, eh?? I like this mental chink to fall through. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Thoughts do create reality as we know it. "the watcher" is wise.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Mesmerizing in the way you elicit thought via these verses, Debby. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Thought provoking write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
You always make me think Debby. This is a poem of strength and truth.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
and to think we were all alone, would be an uttered shame...
Fabulous journey here Debby~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
The watcher or a Peeping-Tom lurking there to go inside the secrets and emotions of one that made itself a prey?
Well done.
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Hmnn I can relate to this, for because I don't always believe in th Christian premise of God,I do believe there is a higher power or force that oversees the world as we know it. Well done way to get us thinking.

Fee


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