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who are you
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when I didn't readily fall asleep and my mind started writing...this arrived


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“who are you”, it asked
“I am” came the reply
 
“I am” consistent in its changing
once granite it its beliefs
solid of purpose
eroding now like sandstone
rigidity made pliable
and labeled maturity
wherein “I am” spoke
inaudible to human ear
 
a sense or feeling
instinct to wholeness
oneness in a flash of
thought 
 
“who are you”, it asked
“I am” came the reply
 
“I am” flexing in temporal event
like a dreamspell familiar
winging and misty
appearing from other realm
unfamiliar and known
lucidity marvels miracles
beyond illusions reality
consistent in its changing
 
whether it is “you” or “I”


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 Reviews of "who are you"
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Hi Debby - so glad i read this - the last stanza is wonderful, 'I am' sure does shine through -super poem, Nicky x

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Debby, this is a wonderful illustration of how inspiration comes unexpectedly when one least expects it...Outstanding write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Thought-provoking and worthy of more than a single reading, Debby. It's amazing how inspiration seems to come when one cannot get to sleep sometimes. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
an insightfully inspired conversation 'me" and the "other" ;)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
A very dreamy feel makes this poem very enjoyable-

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Beautifully done...mystic encapturing write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
I like this one and I have often also experienced that sleep breaching spirit who talks in tongues we seldom can recall completely in daylight but leaves little tid bits of data to keep us thinking the next day.

Fee

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
This is a deep thought provoking write.. I have come to the conclusion that,, YOU ARE YOU,, expressing inner self from inner soul!......M

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
I Am Only Answer To Moses on Mountain,i.e. (God) Was Flexing Temporal Event...

Nothing Has Changed-Credit For Thwe Write...

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
profound yet lucid in the truth of what you extract from it. Excellent Debby,life always in a state of flux,never changing;-)...

ET

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
This is very deep Debby!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Wow, so deep and profound in the writing...beautiful!

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
It is amazing what can happen in the mind betwixt the waking and sleeping state. All mine does, in similar circumstances, is churn up mind-boggling imagery. A delightful write.
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
I enjoyed this semi-mystical write
a bit like the state between sleep and wake, when you are never quite sure what's real and what ain't

Walt

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Quite captivating, Debby!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
How beautiful it filters in & then pours out - From this soulful entity with so-much clout - - {beautiful} evol=love Ted

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Sometimes "they" will not allow sleep to come because "they" have something to say. Yours speak with a flair and style. Really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Quite a question of the moments muse, enjoyed.


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