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mercury
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a quickened breeze blew through the windows
reducing the temperature by several degrees
then a moment of thunder that yielded no rain
 
the world sits on a threshold to experience itself
courage of seeing some ultimate truth
reality changes through personal perception
states of awareness and some optimal proof
 
fears are the rules, rigid to outcomes
victims, betrayals, and harsh punishments
loves are  beliefs and acceptance
allowing the courage of change
 
healthy awareness optimal faith
in the self and the collective
where miracles are based
 

 


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 Reviews of "mercury"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 30, 2007
A thought provoking write. To look into ones innerself is hard sometimes, but neccessary.........M

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
A true thought provoker sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Debby, yours is an interesting and deeply thought provoking pen, one which I count myself fortunate to read.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
loves are beliefs and acceptance
allowing the courage of change

healthy awareness optimal faith
in the self and the collective
where miracles are based

This is truth and wisdom in a nutshell... Love casts all fear aside and in an atmosphere of unconditional acceptance and willingness to make or be vulnerable, this is the crucible in which miracles of change and growth will occur. Fantastically clear and so well-sustained for dealing with matter that is so difficult to get a concrete handle on. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
I believe we are about to experience a part of ourselves that we never knew existed. We've been pouring sand into the gas tank on this planet too long.

There is certainly something to be said about unity established on the foundations of love, and under the banners of understanding and wisdom that allow miracles to manifest - it certainly would be nice to see more of them. That cat that Ed wrote about today is certainly a miracle manifested in my opinion.

Thought-provoking and insightful write Debby - well done!
Richard

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
So few believe in miracles these days, even though they do exist. Victor

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
love these lines: reality changes through personal perception
states of awareness and some optimal proof-they are so very true

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
as long as people continue to act away from reason and tolerance things look bleak indeed.

Walt

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
civilization is definitely on the threshold of transformation ... it may look bleak but i have faith in those who will channel positivity into action ... hopefully in time, these "invisible legislatures " will produce some effective leaders ... excellent poem, Debby ... well developed imagery and message ...

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
The awareness within each of us can produce the source of which allows us to encounter and touch upon the miracles of life...

an interesting and desriptive work...

enjoyed.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
the world sits on a threshold to experience itself
courage of seeing some ultimate truth

And I hope many will finally see it.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
nicely done

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
José Feliciano sung once "The windmills of your mind" the wording of this poem took me back so many years back...
Although, this poem has an happy ending.
Georg

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on July 25, 2007
Mary Shelly' thanks you for the photo,and I thank you for the wonderful poem,well done that poet.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 25, 2007
This work makes an impacting statement on the world and the way things seem to be. Strong but with a hint of hope that maybe things will somehow change.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 25, 2007
The poem and graphic are fantastic! methinks we are on similar paths tonight;-)

Eileen


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