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inner chamber
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I led an unbridled mare,
white with black mane
through a forest
the sky crisp
and sharp with mornings breath
clinging in the air
fur and hide
are my outer garments
the breeze tossing
strings of spiderlings
across the open rays
of the early sun
and the leaves crackle
as we walk
 
ahead, a cave in view
an amber light glowing
from its inner chamber
the sensation of familiar
welcomes my certainty
and the outer world disappears
 
the walls are cool and damp
rocks and pine needles
cover the floor
the mare is left to graze
as I accustom my eyes to
the light
 
I am greeted by your speaking eyes
sitting beyond the open flames
eyes, that straddle my thoughts
glimpse my impression
and render my content
in a manner that
makes me warm


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 Reviews of "inner chamber"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Super good write, and the picture is pretty cool too!

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Woah! Your words took me along your path and into such a loving and peaceful chamber. This poem is incredibly romantic and sensual.

Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
I have to agree with Felix on this one, much left to the imagination of your reder, well versed.

Walt

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
Entering the cave of thoughts like literary food entering the mouth of an inspired poet by the surrounding nature and the solace of a moment for herself.
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
Rich tapestry that leaves the reader pondering the meaning of this tryst in the cave, yet feels the warmth of the moment shared...

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
Peaceful, serene photograph! So endearing and ever enlightening....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
not a bad way to spend some time-love the flow of this and the mystery as well


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