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awakened
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it is there upon first awakening
riding on the beams of sun
that slip through the
spaces between the blinds
with a freshness and purity
in the clearest of whispers
 
poetry…poetic words, stanzas,
phrases expertly strung and laced
smoothly flowing in ever grace
I coo and soothe in their familiarity
absorbing free form verses
of such beautification I dare not fully awake
 
in just that instant of comprehension
the very act of contemplation,
the perfect moment of realization
everything stops
sounds of the awakened world
enter my mind
like the hum of the furnace
traffic in the distance
the rustle of the bed clothes


as my legs stretch out


from their slumbers crept
and I know from this other
world I have slept
 
and now take my steps
into this world filled of
irresistible love



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 Reviews of "awakened"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 20, 2007
Lovely sentiments. You have captured most effectively the moments of inspiration born, Debby. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
that solitary moment of awakening promotes a lifetime of love ... excellent poem, Debby ...

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
You have awakened in me a realization that I'd never given full attention - when I awake each day. As I read, I could feel every movement and every breath.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
What a gloriious transition Debby! I envy the ease with which you wrote this beauty!Kudo's!

ET

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Well done Debby.

Walt

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Exquisite in every way possible.

Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Opening the eyes to a new day, is like been born again, because you were granted one day more.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
beautiful!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
the perfect moment of realization
everything stops

Wonderful imagery, Debby, and a wondrous picture.


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