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subtle energy
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the feeling of subtle energy sensations,
the body tingles along its shoulders
like hundreds of velvet butterfly antennae
and the  heartbeat is quickened
beating like their extended wings
before calming itself
 
awareness becomes a flush along the neck
then flutters as raindrops upon the solar plexus
tingles again this time like cat purrs
felt in various areas of the
arms, calves, and scalp
serene arrives eyes close
 
behind the eyes
a bright white light beams
the hands experience a sensation of warmth
and imagined physical body expansion
a gentled rush travels
down the inner body
toes wiggle
in a reaction of alive
 
an inside  smile
releases the emotional sense of joy
the mind holds the instant
into a recalled consciousness
to link the internal
connection upon its
view of the external world

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 Reviews of "subtle energy"
Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Can I have what she is having ?

Tony

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 6, 2008
Sensually powerful and replete with physical and spiritual energy; thank you for sharing this gift, Debby. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 5, 2008
Wickedly good! :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Yes, indeed. As others have already said, you are such a good witness of the sensed and felt within your own body and aura. Your ability to put such sensations into words astounding. And somehow, that picture of the pearls resting on that blue silk captures your mood perfectly. The final stanza is a wonderfully centred state of being from which to operate in life. Our tangible external realities start from what's inside. Beautiful meditation, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
you exemplify conscious energy superbly, Debby ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
I loved this-sensual, intelligent, well-formed and just tight.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Well done! You have expressed many of the emotions and feeling of love!. I really like the poem........M

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
...excellent images...so well written your words here...the in and out of energy...and how we see it...through your wonderful write.
fine work Debby...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Wow! A constant flow of energy described to perfection stunning the senses! I love this Debby!!!Your descriptive powers are superb!

ET

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Nothing subtle about this vision - plants inself in the eyes and attaches itself in the heart nicely

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Pearls of eternity, beautiful photograph! A very inspirational and well constructed piece, expressive beauty....

Be always safe
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
What a wonderful write, flows smooth, with excellent imagery, detail and outstanding inspiration, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
I like this, it reads easilly and flows flawlesly.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
The feeling of Source lifting up within us when we remove the lid of resistance is Divine. You capture it beautifully.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Such sweet subtle sensuality that makes the body want to stretch out and as suggested purr like a contented kitty...love it.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
nice expression of the subject--very well done


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