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strands of electric
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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true experience

 

 

 

like a mad professor with Einstein hair

he came running across a grassy field

with a grand hugging gesture

we smiled like long lost friends

 

over the years he has been a teacher

often in lecture halls and small classrooms

like flashes of insight my memory processes

our epic encounters that have lasted throughout

my lifetime

 

of course, he only exists in my dreamland

what he teaches is not of logic nor typical

of my earthbound education experienced

 

excited to know my progress

he squeals with childlike excitement

“can you see it’, “can you see the colors”?

he asks, as if there’s a clue what he is confirming

 

“there, there” in your hands and quickly

positions my hands palms upward and

spread apart, and in that instant clear as light

was the most fantastic spectacle of neon blue

 

arcing between both my palms like current

were 5 strands above and 5 strands below

easily played into wave forms as wrists flexed

and pulsed this colored energy back and forth

 

a grin crossed my lips delighted in this

newly discovered presence and quickly noticed

the entire scene evaporating before

the chance to further inquire this lesson

 

and you know…all day,  been trying to

recreate seeing that energy….

 


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 Reviews of "strands of electric"
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on January 4, 2010
You certainly KNOW how to communicate that energy! I though maybe you had a vision of Einstein at first! - Chosen words and visuals. I wish my visualizations were so graphic - but then maybe I work in the fields of sound better. Whether you find it or make it, I love your art - graphics that go with these sonic/ethereal poems.
Next time, Mike

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 3, 2009
One could feel the energy building throughout your poem. It was to say the least 'electrifying.'

Cheers from the west side of the Cascades.
Dan

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 27, 2009
I enjoy reading this poem.This is very good.take care

Reviewed on November 25, 2009
I could see it all and wish to find that energy too!! Well penned.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
Lucid dreams are perhaps those that connect the dream-state with the fully-conscious and are like a bridge where many phenomena can pierce the membrane between the two. The nearest thing I can liken it to is what lingers on our peripheral vision or, conversely, how in a night sky the far-off nebulae become clearer if you don't look directly at them. I love this recurring dream-character professor, and maybe he is a catalyst of these "bridges" of energies that link the two states. Is he a sign, perhaps, that, when you see him, you are hovering between two suspended worlds? I think such manifestations of visible energy often occur where our perceptions of "worlds" collide. Now I'm waffling and playing with ideas... but thanks for the fascinating picture. Do let us know if you come up with any answers! Intriguing and delightful, xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
This captured me 'strands of electric' so very good.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
Our imaginations are one of our most treasured gifts and when we open our minds and hearts to it we are blessed beyond counting. You know the magic of using your imagination and your heart.
fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
No run of the mill poetry for you, M'Lady. Oh no, this is exquisite in it treatment of what is all around is if only we could train our eyes to observe. Delightful reading.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 23, 2009
Saw a picture of two atoms colliding with the most amazing display of energy strands that were as long aged as man's life in the universal time but with a perfect light of its own!

Georg


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
Thank you for sharing this fascinating (and thought-inciting) experience, Debby. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
Somehow I keep picturing the crazy professor from Back to the Future in all this. Interesting poem and insight into bridging the gap between the dream and waking world.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
Wow Debby what a neat picture! What a fantastic write, and sounds like one fantastic experience too...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on November 22, 2009
You have, in Strands of Electric verse, Debby - this is beautiful. I sense a childlike wonder in these lines - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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