become (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2010

Great advice. Nicely delivered.

Reviewed on May 26, 2010

To just be....I've thought and used this phrase often in my work...at times, it's simple....and at others, it's difficult. I think, there are times in life when we feel pushed to the limit, and when we want to toss in the towel...and I think it's okay to feel that way for a time...it's what we do next that's important. Yes, just be...but there are times when it's important to not only just be, but to move ahead. Beautifully written....your work is a true inspiration.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 11, 2010

you are already enlightened
you are already all that is
you are already magnificent

I find your verses replete with meaningful wisdom and encouragement, Debby. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on February 5, 2010

Perhaps, and I can be wrong here, but it would seem to me the first thing one must do to 'become' is to lose ego. Wise words.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 3, 2010

ah, but revelation is the key!!! all our understanding is a locked box unless we are enlightened to the Truth which then releases the power from within. Here you equip us with the key to becoming. thank you! And personally, i believe The Spark is God! :)) xx

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on February 3, 2010

This is a very inspiring and uplifting piece, Debby. I am one with you in the belief that we need not look and seek elsewhere for that glimpse of heaven because it is just within us, in our hearts where truth resides. Blessings to you. Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes,
Sheri

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

beautiful words of truth and inspiration

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

much wisdom scribed herein, debby.
excellent write.
cg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

You are right Debby,but what defeats those who don't know it, is that they can't bring themselves to believe in this truth.so they don't "become" Hopefully your enlightened poem will help them experience the "Spark"!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

This is a wonderful write Debby and very
inspiring too! God bless you and I am pleased
to meet you! Thanks for stopping by!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

I keep trying to become but this aging body keeps telling me that I am headed for death and a transition that is very dependant on the choices that I made in this life. Your work inspires thought Deddy. I hope that all is well.
richard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 31, 2010

"...is the truth that sets one free..." and in a world enshrouded in lies...truth is the only option...

Georg

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

A grand poem a grand picture and a grand poet!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

Sounds like great advise and one we should all explore fully...thanks for sharing your insight Deb.
fee

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

yes, for those of us who recognize this it is a glorious journey indeed! I only hope all others do someday. nice write!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

Just BE--the incredible miracle that you are and unique in the universe.
How can this be so hard, yet so simple? Because we take to heart the criticism we hear throughout our lives and our own negative self-talk that not only blocks our creativity but that precious "spark". Wonderful write, Debby, and very timely ;)! Blessings, Lin