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sky
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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where does the earth end
and the sky begin?

is the horizon just
the eye level of distance?

in pondering, I sense
the earth connection with my feet

my breathing absorbing the
aether all around me

I look up, why must
the sky be above?

lowering my head and gaze
I recognize the sky comes along

...it's all around me
the very substance to breathe,
sit in, and walk through...


an ocean of sky and
I'm completely submersed
and in love with
this permeating sensation


my awareness of thoughts shift from
the internal
which looks out through brown eyes


onto the delicate and subtle
layers floating all around me


above my head, now right, then left


exploring the ecstatic comprehension
this awareness
does not live inside my body...


and is the sky as self


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 Reviews of "sky"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
... the sky as self, yes: absolutely! As far as I'm concerned, sky starts where grass ends! :)) Wonderfully mind-expanding and exhilarating write, Debby. Thank you. xx

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 10, 2010
Excellent work. On another planet...in another corner of our universe...WE are a part of the sky. Odd to see someone say why is the sky up? I see it as ALL AROUND as when our planet rotates in its orbit Up is anywhere but on earth even the opposite side of our planet, right?

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on October 29, 2010
Beautiful! Read it with much joy.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on October 19, 2010
We know that space is the final frontier, but does anybody know that when you jump and your feet leave the ground you are actually in space? And what about the sky? Is the sky where heaven is, or did Jesus mean something else when you said heave above? We see a blue sky, the harmful rays of the sun filtering through layers of gases we call our atmosphere. The sky is a word man thought up, but when we speak of God and His house that has many rooms, we are not speaking about our sky, but the sky of eternity. The ether we will live in after we leave this life. So don't let the sun catch you crying for your hand that life dealt you, but hold your head up high and be proud that your Father watches over you through His son who has sent his angels to help guide us. Thank you Debby for this endearing piece that has a straight forward message of faith and love.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 16, 2010
imagine looking from another planet to its sky .... the universal perspective does indeed manifest from within oneself ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 15, 2010
I've had similar thoughts so often,you captured the essence,well! I love being on the very top of a mountain that can look down to the places below where the sky goes way down below, all around you, out of sight. Fine poem, Debby!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on October 12, 2010
And there's nothing like lying on your back under a great tree and looking at the sky through its limbs. One of my favorite meditations along with lying on my rooftop and star-gazing... "sky stuff" - great!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 12, 2010
beautiful!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 12, 2010
absorbing, wonderfully expressed capture. "an ocean of sky"
with stars in one's eyes! "as above, so below"...
very much enjoyed,
cg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Profound and flowing thoughts, Debby.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Love the photo and the wonderful drifting thoughts that speak openly from your heart and soul...
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Thank you for sharing this wonderful perspective, Debby. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Great, intoxicating write, Debby. It makes sense too. ;-)

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 11, 2010
Amazing piece of writing...very deep.

Cheers,
Dan


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