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gate
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The ticket said Gate 7
i stood at Gate 6, across was 5
and beyond was 8
however, gate 7 did not exist
or rather appear within the
appearance of the gates

turning in a circle
slowly, perhaps i could
imagine the appearance

the circle wavered
in the perpherial vision

looking again they now
all said Gate 7

logic would not be a tool
and doubt played a mischievious sound

therefore i tore the ticket into two
and all the gates disappeared

and it did not matter because
i no longer had a ticket


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 Reviews of "gate"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
A mind bending poem with art to match! What a gift you have,Debby! love it!

Eileen

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Now you can see how beauty lies within the lines as if they were rails to different destinations.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 7, 2012
yes, of course!! the obvious way out of the conundrum - very good lateral thinking here, Debby: love the key lines:

logic would not be a tool
and doubt played a mischievious sound

love this reasoning equation you set us here. xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
when one crosses over into higher consciousness no fare is necessary ... glad you threw the ticket into the wind ... intriguing mind puzzle you've scripted here ...


Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
Scary Deb, sounds like the twilight zone...enjoyed.

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
Intriguing and captivating in thought provoked, Debby. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
Sometimes the best choice, is not to make a choice at all.

Ron

Reviewed on March 6, 2012
You have found wider more profound horizons, no gates, no tickets, deliberate actions of choice, maybe, not sure judging by the picture, there seems to be a wanting, foregone of time eternal, melancholy, yet such rich brocade of wisdom, seventh heaven without a gate. Bless you!


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