the "I don't knows" of the profound stillness of an age-old stone are perhaps more of a challenge than the "what is" and "what could be", Debby. But the joy undoubtedly is that the experience of creation always tends to enlighten and inform us of the "I don't knows" even by its very action. Love the stillpoint of "dwelling" in this write. xx
This is what happens when you're smoking grass, just kiddin of course not, on a serious note, this ladder to the green abode, let me there along with your poem, beautiful your reach of your expanded surroundings with the grasp of ink and pen, hugs!
What a wonderful mental trip you have taken up on, Debby. Question abound, with the haunting "I don't know" an elusive, forever not answered, away from your grasp. Excellent!
The visual delight of the background leads like a doorway to the words you are conveying. Almost feels like eavsedropping on your inner most thoughts. Very nicely done.
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You provide much substance to reflect upon in your verses here, Debby. A lovely and meaningful presentation is this. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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This leaves the reader with much to contemplate.
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