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unseen
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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do you still live here
it?s hard to tell
haven?t seen you for days
and I miss you

checked your room
your stuff?s still there
did I leave on the light
or did you?

the feeling is odd
and melancholy
and I can?t remember
the last time I saw you

do you still live here
it?s hard to tell
haven?t seen you for days
and I've missed you





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 Reviews of "unseen"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
an interesting write. peace
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Hunting write...yes.....superb!!!!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
A most deep touching write with wonderful expression. Very Good Work here with this one!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Haunting write!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Excellent expression, truly felt... great write, Debby...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
This one touches so deeply, beautifully written,

Reindeer
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Sounds like a teenaged son!! Been there, know the feeling. Great poem.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
The sound of sadness rings out in your voice. Debby, for whatever reason ... this is a poem with a sad wonder in it. Who is it? Someone very close I know. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
A great sense of longings well-expressed.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
Know the Feeling...thats why I get so lonely!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
Funny how we can live with people and go for days without seeing them.;-)It's uncanny;-)Good one Debby!
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
"absense does make the heart grow fonder"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
Did a child go off to college?
Have a great night..........
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